Help Please! Please vote for you favourite title

[Rachael Burnett]

New nom-de-plume unlocked

My first name gets misspelled all the time. Even my work colleagues don't always get it right. Of course, they kinda' suck.

I tried to be subtle with the "Burn" in Burnett, but I don't do subtle well.

Good luck with your novel

Thanks @Bloo✒️

 

[RK Wallis]

The book Cinder was really popular last decade. What if you tried to resonate with that YA title? Help you get traction?

maybe, Cinder Burns, Cinder's Revenge, Cinder's Ember, Cinder's Fire, Cinder's Trigger, Cinder Ignites? you see where I'm going...

Just a thought...

 

[Rachael Burnett]

The book Cinder was really popular last decade. What if you tried to resonate with that YA title? Help you get traction?

maybe, Cinder Burns, Cinder's Revenge, Cinder's Ember, Cinder's Fire, Cinder's Trigger, Cinder Ignites? you see where I'm going...

Just a thought...

Thanks, Rachel. Lots of great ideas

 

[Pamela Jo]

Burnt to Cinders

 

[Rachael Burnett]

Burnt to Cinders

Nice

 

[Peyton Stafford]

Sorry if I already read the story, but while the title discussion is lively, I feel ungrounded. Never mind. You do not owe me an explanation.

 

[LJ Beck]

What about introducing something more Cinderella-esk? Glass slippers, fairy godmother, stroke of midnight? I thought at first it was a straight out steamy romance with titles like "Fire That Consumes Me" and such. haha.

Not sure if any of these elements are in your version, but for example, "Burning Cinders at the Stroke of Midnight." (But better)

 

[Claire G]

What about introducing something more Cinderella-esk? Glass slippers, fairy godmother, stroke of midnight? I thought at first it was a straight out steamy romance with titles like "Fire That Consumes Me" and such. haha.

Not sure if any of these elements are in your version, but for example, "Burning Cinders at the Stroke of Midnight." (But better)

Midnight Cinders?

 

[Vagabond Heart]

How about a Shakespeare quote?
The Cinders of my Spirit

It’s said by Cleopatra, a woman who refused to play by rules laid down by the tyrant men in her life.

 

[Rachael Burnett]

How about a Shakespeare quote?
The Cinders of my Spirit

It’s said by Cleopatra, a woman who refused to play by rules laid down by the tyrant men in her life.

Nice. I've added to the poll.

 

[Katie-Ellen]

I would greatly appreciate it if you could vote for your favourite title in the above poll. The book is loosely based on Cinderella. This supernatural thriller infuses an Angela Carter-esque twist. Supported by her unconventional godmother, the Cinderella character strives for justice against her violent stepfamily, whom she holds responsible for her mother's death in a fiery incident.

Many thanks,
Rachael

Just "Cinders".

 

[RK Wallis]

Just "Cinders".

Probably too close to Cinder...