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  • Following the Snowflake method for writing a one line blurb. Mine would end up being: Young telepath searches for her parents' killers and uncovers a plot to overthrow the planetary government.
    Barbara
    Barbara
    Spot on. Good line to go into the agent letter.
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    OperaDivaAlix
    Hey Rachel, can I call you Rach for short? Do you want to do it over LITOPIA? PM? or EMAIL? The choice is yours and we can do a swap if you like of Query Letters :)
    I caught your Pop-up sub, Barbara. A good voice is something to cherish! I'd hang on to that if I were you :) Keep at it!
    Rich.
    Rich.
    I'm trying to teach myself to pay attention to the 'Writing Force'. Often, after receiving criticism, I'll think, 'Yeah, kind of knew that, kind of had a dull feeling while writing it.'
    At which point another part of my brain screams, 'Then why the freakin' Nora didn't you pay more attention when you were writing it? Clod head!'
    If the voice in my head sounded more like Alec Guinness, perhaps I'd pay more attention.
    Barbara
    Barbara
    Maybe make it sound like Bob Hoskins?
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    Rich.
    Rich.
    Actual LOL. You've solved it good and proper.
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