Paul Whybrow
Full Member
- Jun 20, 2015
Follow along with the video below to see how to install our site as a web app on your home screen.
Note: This feature may not be available in some browsers.
That was back when there was still coke in soda. Since then it's just pokey.I always thought it was Hokey Cokey?
Somehow I can't see an agent biting on: 'I see it sitting between Vermilion and Cerise'.
One of my pet hates is when people swear, though don't swear because they've censored it.
Children roll their eyes if someone writes f**k or fudge or anything like that in a YA. It's condescending to them. Patronising. Because they fucking well know the word fuck. But if it's overused, the writing becomes sloppy. It's also fine not to use it or make up an alternative, but they won't forgive trying to hide the word in case any younger-than-adult is offended.One of my pet hates is when people swear, though don't swear because they've censored it.
If you're going to write the phrase "Give a fuck", or "Not giving a fuck", then write "fuck."
F*ck isn't a word and just looks stupid. If you don't want to swear, then write give a damn instead, or give a fig, or give a hairy hillside, or give a jot. You could even have a play on words, like Give a cluck, for a book about chickens. We have loads of expressive words. Use them.
If I ever see F*ck in a title on Popups, I'm giving it one star and rantage.
Sometimes all I do is spuddle all effing day.So now I can answer when people ask me how the writing is going.
View attachment 13130