Hey, I'm a newbie writer for the YA market and I'm currently plodding away at the rough draft of my first novel and will hopefully post some of my writing for some feedback
If I can find a way to post it on here I willWelcome.
We'd love to see it.
Seems a lot to me but I'm not sure I'll make that many!
Ah, that old chestnut. I think it was the knowledgeable @Carol Rose who explained it as: "demonstrate" = show.
Demonstrate their feelings etc, not tell.
Do you read much YA? There is so much good stuff out there.