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Craft Chat CRAFT CHAT: Genre Reader Expectations - Part One

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GENRE READER EXPECTATIONS – PART ONE

Welcome to another multi-part series in Craft Chat! This one will be at least two parts, but probably more. As I began writing this one, I soon realized the topic is so vast and cumbersome, I don’t want to overwhelm you with that much information in one post. I also don’t want to skimp on any of it. It’s too important.

In this part, we’ll examine the two largest genres – Romance and Science Fiction and Fantasy.

When we talk about reader expectations within specific genres, we must first talk about what that actually means. We must also preface any discussion with the fact that none of this is set in stone. What I’m going to give you is the most current information I can find today, and it’s mostly relevant to the US market. Doesn’t mean it isn’t useful if you’re submitting to UK publishers, but please bear in mind this series is more of an overview and a jumping off point than solid technique or instruction.

If you do a Google search for reader expectations in any genre, you’ll find dozens of links, and some of them will contain conflicting information. Why? Because there are no standards. This is fluid, and it changes with the country in which your publisher is located, as well as reader tastes. Reader tastes and preferences ebb and flow, based on societal norms, popular music, popular television shows, and a host of other variables we have little, if any, control over.

Consequently, this is both a frustrating and potentially obsolete topic. It’s a catch-22 for writers. If you don’t know what you’re writing, and aren’t able to identify that to potential agents and editors, they don’t know how to sell your work. If they don’t know how to sell it, they are less likely to take it on. If you’ve watched even one Pop-Up Submissions show, you already know Agent Pete talks all the time about a work needing to be commercial. What does that mean?

Well, it has to do with the work having the potential to sell in more than one medium. In other words, an agent is going to look at your work from the standpoint of not only will it sell as a book, but is there the potential for a movie, a TV show, or some other type of merchandising? Will it appeal to people outside the country in which it’s set?

Also, they are looking for where to slot your book on the shelves - virtual or brick and mortar. Why? This allows them to predict how it will sell against others out there like it. If they’re unable to figure that out, they will probably pass. They only make money if your book sells. And without being able to compare it to what’s currently selling, it can be difficult for them to guess how readers will react to it.

They aren’t out there trying to find reasons to reject a book. I see that notion put forth a lot – even on Litopia. And usually by people who are racking up rejections. It’s utter nonsense. This is their business. Their job. Their livelihood. They are looking for work they can sell. Period. It’s not personal to you or to any other writer, so please do yourself a huge favor and get over that idea. It simply isn’t true and never has been.

Writing in any genre brings the challenge of putting your own unique spin on it so it doesn’t sound like everything else out there. Some genres present more of a challenge to do this than others, because so much already exists. That’s why it’s so important to READ in the genre you’re writing. How else can you expect to know what’s currently selling, and what someone has written already?

The topic is also potentially obsolete because there are so many hybrid genres now that it’s almost pointless to talk about reader expectations in one specific genre. If you regularly watch Pop-Up Submissions, you already know people simply make up a genre if their work doesn’t fit neatly into one of the existing labels. That’s fine and well, but again, it makes it more challenging to predict selling potential.

Okay. Now that we’ve defined what this reader expectation stuff is, and why agents and editors find it important to identify, let’s talk about those labels. Where did they come from in the first place?

Great question. Both because they are arbitrary, and because it’s important to understand that they are also fluid. They have changed, and will change again over time.

For example, two hundred years ago when Jane Austen wrote her satires on the woes and worries of being an upper middle class single woman in search of a husband, the label Regency Romance didn’t exist. She was writing about contemporary times from her perspective. We gave them labels of Regency and Historical Romance decades later. But in reality, they are neither because when she wrote them, they were contemporary satires.

All the romances I’ve written in the past eight years may one day be called Historical Romances (assuming the books are still available somewhere out there to download and read!) because they will be set in the past. But when I wrote them, they were set in the present. My present.

The point of all this is that those genre labels are relative only to today’s publishing world. And yet, it’s important we understand them because when you submit to an agent or editor, they need to know you know where your book fits in with what’s currently selling. You need to know your audience, and you need to know their expectations.

To that extent, we have to talk labels and readers. Doing this shows an agent or editor that you understand the current publishing industry, and that you know who you’re writing to. That may change one day, but we can’t predict it. We need to deal with what’s expected right now.

Romance

I’m starting with this one because I understand it best for obvious reasons. For those of you who don’t know, I’m published in contemporary, historical, fantasy, science fiction, erotic romance. I have 95 publications under three pen names.

If you explore the romance genre today, you’ll find dozens of sub-genres. As a genre, in the USA, romance has been defined as such for over fifty years. The Romance Writers of America (RWA) was founded in 1980, and is the professional organization for romance writers across all sub-genres in the USA. The Romance Novelists’ Association (RNA) is the professional organization representing romance writers in the UK, and serves the same purpose as the RWA.

Both organizations define a ROMANCE as a story depicting a growing relationship that includes more than a physical one between two or more people, and which concludes with a happily-ever-after (HEA) or a happily-for-now (HFN). If those key elements do not exist in the story, technically it is not a romance.

However… we can all point to stories that are called romances but obviously stray from this formula. But I’m here to tell you that hard-core romance readers, for the most part, do not want writers straying from the key elements.

That being said, as the sub-genres and hybrid genres increase, there is a growing audience for less traditional romances. The advice I’m going to give you for writing in this genre, or in one of the many sub-genres, is to READ books like the one you want to write.

Really, as we stared earlier, that advice is true for any genre. You can’t know what’s selling unless you read, and unless you keep track by way of an organization such as Publishers Marketplace.

Almost all agents today tweet and blog. Follow the ones you want to target to keep current on what they’re looking for. You can’t expect to go online for one day and learn all you need to know about where to submit that 300,000 word historical thriller romance mystery you just wrote. That’s an unrealistic goal, and you’ve already set yourself up to fail. You need to know the market.

Do you also need to join professional writing organizations? Well, it can’t hurt. It will definitely give you contacts and information.

The RWA is one of the few professional writing organizations you can join without being published in the genre. So if you’re serious about becoming a romance writer, join it. The education and contacts alone are worth the membership fee. There are local chapters in nearly every US state, as well as dozens of online chapters to join, so you don’t even have to live in the USA to be part of this organization and an online chapter. To join a chapter you need to also belong to the main organization.

One quick note on romance versus erotica, because if you write romance, you need to understand this. They are NOT the same. I see these terms confused a lot everywhere. Even here on Litopia.

Erotica is basically porn. The relationship is all about the sex. Without it, there is no story. If you remove the sex, the story falls apart because the relationship in that story is only a physical one.

Romance, on the other hand, even that written in the sub-genre called Erotic Romance, is still a ROMANCE by definition. If you remove the physical relationship in the story, the romance between the main characters still stands. Erotic Romance isn’t termed erotic only because of the graphic sexual details in the story. It’s also called that because the language tends to be cruder or more graphic, and there is no closed-door sex.

Science Fiction and Fantasy

The professional organization in the USA for science fiction and fantasy writers is the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America (SFWA).It was founded in 1965 for published authors and industry professionals in the fields of science fiction, fantasy, and related genres. To join you must be published in the field and have qualifying sales as outlined on the website.

There are numerous articles on the site describing specifics for various sub-genres, such as Middle Grade or YA science fiction or fantasy. I’ll be honest. The sub-genres are muddled, and they vary from the US to the UK.

Depending on which blog you read, you’ll find definitions of the sub-genres all over the board. And it’s way beyond the scope of this Craft Chat post to discuss them each in detail. There’s an excellent search function on the site that will help you narrow down current definitions for most of the sub-genres within these two huge genres, as well as US definitions for YA and Middle Grade within the genres.

Generally speaking, sci-fi readers and fantasy readers alike are very particular about keeping things pure. Writers, however, don’t like to do that. These are probably the two genres where you will see the most crossover and hybrids popping up.

Science fiction is fiction about science. The science might be invented, and it might be political science, psychology and sociology, electronics, or the type with beakers and skeletons. But all sci-fi revolves around a central what if question that addresses a deeper query. Sci-fi is generally set in the present or the future.

Stories in this genre are also frequently set on another planet, giving rise to the argument by some that those stories are more fantasy than pure science fiction. To further confuse matters, many prominent sci-fi writers dislike the genre’s name, instead preferring speculative fiction.

As with all the genres, READ the books out there with labels most closely associated with what you’re aiming to write. This will give you the best indicator of what’s currently selling. I’d also suggest if you’re writing in these two genres to take a look at the site linked above, even if you’re in the UK. Use the search feature. It’s free to look without joining. There are tons of useful blog posts to explore. Learning about reader expectations in your chosen genre takes work and time. Don’t skip this important step.

Fantasy has evolved into a massive genre with many sub-genres, but generally it is set in the past or the present. It often has a medieval setting, and may contain mythology or folklore elements, such as dragons, fairies, and elves. It can also be realistic but set in a fictional universe. This otherworld usually contains supernatural elements.

Fantasy has been described as wish fulfillment, and as a way to write about issues that are too sensitive to address directly.

Fairy tales, as well as various myths and legends, are often fodder for modern-day fantasy novels. Think Harry Potter and A Song Of Ice and Fire. Both series borrowed heavily from existing fairy tales, myths, and legends.

A good fantasy novel has the magic and mystery of a dream, combined with modern story-telling techniques.

THIS LINK is the best one I found so far that gives detailed information on the main sub-genres. Each is linked to more information and reader expectations, a list of the most common elements in the sub-genre, and examples of books written in the sub-genre.

As I said, there are many others. And you might easily find conflicting information on some of those linked above. It’s frustrating, especially if you’re just starting out and don’t want to sound foolish to others, but please don’t let that derail you. A lot of purism exists in both the writing and reading world. The truth usually lies somewhere in the middle.

What’s most important is that you do your research, and understand what’s selling that most closely resembles what you’re writing. Litopia has a huge number of fantasy writers and readers, so please post your work in the Writing Groups here on Litopia, and let us help you navigate this massive and hugely popular genre.

That’s it for now! Next time we’ll tackle a few more. I’m not sure yet which ones. I’m making sure I have adequate information to give you on the main, traditional genres. We won’t be covering the hybrids because there really is no consistent, reliable information on them at this point, and people are making up new ones every day.
 
Thanks @Carol Rose, another great post :)
I second that! :)

the difference between magical realism and fantasy
Magical realism tends to be fiercely realist, even in its handling of the fantastical – think 100 Years of Solitude by Gabriel García Marquéz or Midnight's Children by Salman Rushdie. And it wouldn't be shelved in the SFF section. You'd find books like this in the General Fiction or Literature sections of the bookshop.

Science fiction is fiction about science. The science might be invented, and it might be political science, psychology and sociology, electronics, or the type with beakers and skeletons. But all sci-fi revolves around a central what if question that addresses a deeper query.
Yes, and that deeper question is the key, I think. There's a long tradition in sci-fi of using science as a lens through which to examine the human condition. So we might say that sci-fi is about humanity's interaction with science. Without that element, it's easy to end up with a technical manual.

many prominent sci-fi writers dislike the genre’s name, instead preferring speculative fiction
They do indeed! Along with the fantasy and horror writers! The term speculative fiction tends to be used as an umbrella genre that encompasses sci-fi, fantasy and horror and all their many permutations and crossovers. The common thread among writers who use the term is often that preoccupation with the human condition I mentioned above.

when you submit to an agent or editor, they need to know you know where your book fits in with what’s currently selling
This is the heart of it, isn't it? And to reinforce what you've already said, Carol, I think a useful way to approach genre, when trying to categorise our own books, is to think about the sections in the bookshop (either physical or virtual) and place our book on the appropriate shelf. If you're unsure where to put yours, an agent or publisher won't know either.
 
think 100 Years of Solitude by Gabriel García Marquéz or Midnight's Children by Salman Rushdie. And it wouldn't be shelved in the SFF section

Thanks @Rich., that really helps, but Google says Harry Potter is 100% magic realism, so you can see why I'm confused :(
As far as I understand it, magical realism requires a basis in reality where extraordinary events are treated as ordinary? So, if we think of it that way, would it be fair to assume that Harry Potter is an exception? Which, in turn, helps answer the question that's been haunting me: is my WIP Magical Realism? Answer, no, because there's no reality as we know it in my WIP.

Or am I off base?
 
No, you're on the right lines. If your WIP doesn't take place in a modern realist world, fantastical elements notwithstanding, it's not magical realism.

Harry Potter as magical realism? Hmm. It's a stretch, and not a small one. Potter would normally be classed as portal fantasy (normal world + magical world, separated by doors (in this case, invitations to Hogwarts and platforms that muggles can't see, etc).

Magical realism, by most critical definitions, is not Harry Potter. But we are talking about literary criticism, so there'll be strong arguments against everything I'm about to say. But that's half the fun, isn't it? (?!)

Magic realism (sic) started out as a German art movement which depicted reality as something mysterious and hyperreal. It was about finding the truth behind the mundane. Literary magic realism, commonly referred to as magical realism, came out of Latin America, with García Marquéz being its most famous exponent. It grew out of the German movement, but incorporated devices that the painters did not – the more overtly fantastical, mystical and folkloric elements. It's a highly political genre, as well as being intensely emotional (continuing the hyperreal theme that the original movement displayed). Outside of Latin America, Salman Rushdie and Haruki Murukami are probably the most well known authors writing in this mode.

So, as I said, to include Harry Potter in that group is... a stretch... to put it mildly. Imagine the letter to the agent: It's a coming-of-age saga about a boy who discovers he's a wizard. I think it would appeal to readers of Love in the Time of Cholera, The Satanic Verses, and Kafka on the Shore.

Hmm.

But... as Carol says... all these definitions tend to be fluid, especially over decades and centuries.

What may be more useful when trying to stick a label on your work, as I said before, is to think about the sections in the bookshop. There's always SFF, but I can't remember ever walking into a store and seeing a dedicated section labelled magical realism.
 
Agreed!

Full disclosure, I always thought magical realism was a Latin American thing, but my better half, who has a master's degree in art history, told me about the German movement.
 
Much as I appreciate Carol's post I feel it is of limited relevance for new writers.
This whole genre thing does my head in. The idea that a first novel must fit into a category and the writer must know exactly how to write that category and where it sits on the bookshop shelf I find depressing and difficult to address. These are things agents will know from a synopsis. They are the experts at this sort of stuff. Sure writing stuff that has little chance of selling is probably not the way to go but beginners always believe in their writing whatever it is.
The idea that first-timers must know how to write to fill a shelf or must learn how to before they begin is a little demanding. Very few first-time novels would ever be completed if that was requisite. I feel all writers write from their soul first of all and of course turn out a lot of rubbish. By applying themselves they can produce something presentable and quite possibly readable but it still comes from within not from a prescription. Perhaps later, once classified as 'professional writers' they can produce work to order. Work that conforms to the demands of the market but that is way down the road for most.
Unless you have lots of luck you will never be published. Once luck arrives and your book is out there others classify it and place it in genres.
 
I think for me, the key to good science fiction is not just speculate on the possibilities of future technology but to really ask what the implications of that technology are on society, particularly the human element as @Rich. has mentioned.

If you consider what could be the original science fiction novel; Frankenstein, it's fundamentally a novel that asks what is it to be human? What is the responsibility of a creator to its creation? A good science fiction novel should ask questions and make the reader think!

I understand your frustration @Steve C but the nature of commerce tends to mean that things need to be targeted towards a particular audience. Most businesses utilise targeted marketing to sell to particular audiences and (unfortunately) a book is still a commercial product and needs to be thought about in these terms, so you'll still need to aim for a genre audience. Some books are obviously more mainstream and appeal to a broader audience, but even if it's your first novel, if you are writing science fiction crime thriller with romantic and horror elements in the vein of literary fiction, publishers/retailers/agents aren't going to know who to sell your book to.
 
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, @Steve C and @Robert M Derry!

@Steve C I also understand your frustration, and I can’t anything to the excellent advice you’ve already been given.

Part of the reason for these posts is to present accurate information about the publishing industry today. But things do change so one day this post might be obsolete.

But today, it’s YOUR job to identify the genre and your audience. :)
 
One thing that's worth pointing out is that General Fiction is also a genre, a category.

Whereas traditional category fiction -- romance, sci-fi, thrillers, and so on -- have certain defining elements, general fiction is simply all those stories (tending towards, but not exclusively, realist fiction) that are about protagonists doing stuff.

It's not too difficult, using nothing more than Google, to figure out what those genre-defining elements are for each of the traditional categories (romance, etc). And if your book is clearly not one of those, then it's not an unreasonable idea to pitch it as general fiction (or just fiction). But it's always a good idea to suggest other books whose readers may like yours.

I do agree that first and foremost you should write to please yourself, but that doesn't negate the need for market awareness.

So, we need to know who might buy our books, but that certainly doesn't inhibit our creativity. As Carol said (and I think it's the best piece of advice in this whole thread):
Writing in any genre brings the challenge of putting your own unique spin on it so it doesn’t sound like everything else out there.
 
I find depressing and difficult to address

Unfortunately, these days there is so much more involved in writing a book. Authors have to know so much. If it's any help, if you understand how the brain fights us, it can help you leap that hurdle because I've been there. The sooner you jump into what needs to be done, the happier you'll be. The brain likes to shy away from any hard work. Fight it. There's a reason Nike chose the slogan "Just do it." I found the short book Lifelong Writing Habit really helpful. Written by a writer for writers. As @Rich. said, this isn't easy, that's why most people give up because they give in to that part of their brain that says, 'that's too hard.'

I fight my brain almost every second of every day, and that's not reading etc, that's just moving. Having to hit the backspace to correct a typo is like lifting 10 kilos with no muscles. I don't want to do it, but I do. If anything, reading is easier than typing for me. Now when you think about it THAT'S depressing; picking up a book (or in my case opening my Kindle app) is a break and pleasure. I could sit here and only read, I have a carer who does everything, but it's not enough stimulation for me. And I love writing, so I'm trying to pull my weight in the only way I know how.

I do agree that first and foremost you should write to please yourself, but that doesn't negate the need for market awareness.

This is 110% true. And @Carol Rose saying this:

But today, it’s YOUR job to identify the genre and your audience.
 
I think it would be nigh on impossible to write a novel that cannot be classified as one genre or another. There are so many now and as Rich mentioned General Fiction will catch those without a home. Trying to write to a fashionable genre is a very difficult task. With all the vagueries on the road to publication, luck, delays, editing, etc by the time the novel is out there fashion might well have moved on.
I remember Agent Pete saying recently on Pop Ups that he doesn't pay too much attention to genre any more as there are so many. It's as if writers write and publishers categorize and if they can't fit a book into an existing genre they simply create a new one for it.
Having said that I have taken the advice for my book that all romances must end happily. Actually, I wrote my ending before I learnt that so it was a happy coincidence. Bits and pieces like that are important but such solid ones are few and far between
 
I hear you @Steve C, but I wonder, have you considered how "will catch those without a home" would sound to an agent?

Every agent is different, but you're doing yourself a disservice by not understanding your genre because not every agent is Agent Pete. You don't want your subtext to be that you've not spent the time understanding where your book fits in the marketplace (and agents will know, they know their stuff). Here are New York agents sharing their perspective. Watch no 10, they really talk about genre and comp titles:

 
You seem a little overwhelmed, Steve. A few years ago I felt exactly the same way. But you'll get there. None of this is insurmountable.

With all the vagueries on the road to publication, luck, delays, editing, etc by the time the novel is out there fashion might well have moved on.
We could all use a little luck, right? But the best kind is the luck you make yourself. And you do that by being an expert in your field.

As for fashion, don't confuse hot topic with established genre. They are not the same thing. Thrillers, mysteries, crime stories, romances, sci-fi, fantasy, and horror are not about to disappear from bookshop shelves. Major genres do come and go – westerns was a huge category not so long ago – but they don't often do so over night.

I remember Agent Pete saying recently on Pop Ups that he doesn't pay too much attention to genre any more as there are so many. It's as if writers write and publishers categorize and if they can't fit a book into an existing genre they simply create a new one for it.
Not quite. The major genres (the ones I mentioned above, and really the only ones you need worry about when starting out) are story templates. They are not about marketing.

Thriller – Something unexpected and life-threatening happens to the protagonist, who must then avoid (literal or figurative) death.​
Mysteries – A puzzle, often of the who-killed-Bob variety, must be solved. A major difference between thrillers and mysteries is that in a straight-up mystery the protagonist's life isn't threatened.​
Crime stories – Mysteries and/or thrillers involving cops and criminals. (If you put the protagonist's life in jeopardy in a mystery, you have a mystery-thriller.)​
Romance – Person meets person. Things may go well for a bit. But other things keep them apart. Obstacles are overcome. There is a crisis... which is resolved at the eleventh hour. Person and person get together.​
Sci-fi – Things happen in technologically interesting places in such a way that some aspect of the human condition is revealed.​
Fantasy – People go on quests. (Actually, sci-fi and fantasy are more like umbrella genres which can borrow freely from all the others. It's their settings that define them, rather than their structure.)​
Horror – People are unrelentingly threatened by monstrous (fantastical) forces until they escape, or don't.​

Story templates. Important things for writers to know. But all those millions of sub-genre names – urban fantasy, courtroom drama, coming of age, etc – are labels to help you navigate the bookshop (particularly the online bookshop). They have traits that define them, settings, characters, outcomes, etc. But they adhere to the basic story templates mentioned above. Those templates are where you should start when trying to get your head around genre. And more fundamentally than that, make sure you're comfortable with story structure in general (the structures that underpin all fiction). The website Novel Writing Help (which I'm not affiliated with in any way) is a good place to start with that.

... I have taken the advice for my book that all romances must end happily ... Bits and pieces like that are important but such solid ones are few and far between
With respect, and indeed the offer of a beer if our paths ever cross, I think you're looking in the wrong places. There's a huge amount of concrete writing advice out there. You just have to give yourself time to develop a critical eye for recognizing it.
 
The major genres (the ones I mentioned above, and really the only ones you need
I'm with the above. Focus on the main umbrella genre, and follow the basic guidelines that define the one you write. After the story is written, find the key words that fit your story and mine the online places to find if there is a subgenre.

The proliferation of 'new' subgenres is usually one of two things:
one - a new stylistic approach to a form of writing (this is one example: What Makes Fiction Bizarro, And What Makes Bizarro Awesome?)
two - gaming the system to get a 'best seller' status in that subgenre.

the problem with two is that if there's only one book in the list, and it's a new subgenre, how do readers know to search for it?
In the end, what we want is for a reader or group of readers to find our story. that's how to look at what genre best reflects the story we write.
for me, the issue isn't how to write in that genre, or how to game the system, it's always: what are the main emotional points of my story and how do they relate to the main genres? After I know that, it's the slight differences in the subgenres that will 'slot' the story - for the benefit of readers who want that type of story.

The easiest way I've found is to determine the BISAC code first, and then look to the electronic lists. If you do paperback (self) publishing, you'll need to find something in the BISAC codes or the book won't get accepted for printing.

And that word 'easiest' is by no means easy. I struggle with finding just the right spot in the subgenre, and so focus only on the main umbrella genre until the story is complete.
Touch wood.
 
Simplest is always best. That's why in this series I'm only focusing on the large, general genres. As I stated in the original post, there are often no consistent standards for reader expectations in the broad genres, let alone the hybrid ones. And that's what this series is about - reader expectations. So if you focus on that - reading in your chosen broad/general genre - you will discover what readers today are looking for.

As @CageSage has pointed out, finding categories in which to slot your book on Amazon is a different animal. We're mainly talking here about submitting to agents and publishers. I'm not self-published, and the idea of navigating that world makes me break out in hives, so I'll leave all that to those who have been there and done that, and are experts at it. :)

In the US at least, agents and editors want to know in the cover letter what genre your book is. I know this varies widely in other parts of the world, so again, the best way to keep up with all that is to follow the industry in some way. Whether that be via a professional organization, or by following targeted agents on their blogs or on social media. Trying to do this without a road map of some kind is way too difficult and complicated. And no one should try to do this without help, especially when so much is available out there.

Hope this helps. :)

And again, thanks to everyone so much for the fantastic contributions to this thread so far! :)
 
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