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Short Story Advice

AmySp

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Hi, Not sure if this is the right place for this but i wanted to ask your advice. I am writing a short story which starts essentially at the end of the story and then goes back. The have a *** break in between but am worried the time jump is unclear. Should I put Earlier or something or will this look odd/ amateurish? Any advice would be gratefully appreciated. :)
 
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