Short Story Advice

[AmySp]

Hi, Not sure if this is the right place for this but i wanted to ask your advice. I am writing a short story which starts essentially at the end of the story and then goes back. The have a *** break in between but am worried the time jump is unclear. Should I put Earlier or something or will this look odd/ amateurish? Any advice would be gratefully appreciated.

 

[Hannah F]

A date? A time? It's difficult to comment without seeing the piece. The place to put it up for advice is the Writing Workshops.

 

[Jake E]

A date? A time? It's difficult to comment without seeing the piece. The place to put it up for advice is the Writing Workshops.

I agree. Difficult to say one way or the other without seeing the writing.