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Happy October. Once more, we have a photo prompt (thank you @Pamela Jo , it's a good'un) and a piece of Flash Fiction up to 700 words. Scare the pants off me, please.

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The entry with the most votes on the 31st of October, 2023, will be the winner of an extraordinary hand-crafted (!!) virtual trophy. And, more importantly: some of our very prized, and internationally-renowned, virtual Litopi-cake.


***NOTE!***
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Your entry must be original work


We ask you not to critique

AND

Please make your entry anonymous by clicking the anonymous button, but if you forget, don't worry, that's okay too. (Note: Guardians can see who posts.)


Best of luck!
 

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Happy October. Once more, we have a photo prompt (thank you @Pamela Jo , it's a good'un) and a piece of Flash Fiction up to 700 words. Scare the pants off me, please.

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The entry with the most votes on the 31st of October, 2023, will be the winner of an extraordinary hand-crafted (!!) virtual trophy. And, more importantly: some of our very prized, and internationally-renowned, virtual Litopi-cake.


***NOTE!***
A thumbs up/like = 1 vote
"heart-eyes" and a "laughing face" emoji vote = 2 VOTES.



The competition is open to all members. Feel free to enter more than once.


-The main rules here are:

Your entry must be original work


We ask you not to critique

AND

Please make your entry anonymous by clicking the anonymous button, but if you forget, don't worry, that's okay too. (Note: Guardians can see who posts.)


Best of luck!

Camping

She didn’t believe in ghosts.

Ghosts were for superstitious fools, for children’s stories, for Hallowe’en. Not for sensible, self-contained forty-eight-year-old women.

But now…the whispering.

She had always taken pride in her toughness, her independence. Alone but never lonely, that was her motto. Fear was something to be conquered, like the mountain she had climbed on her fortieth birthday.

But now…the whispering.

She couldn’t blame the crackle of the camp fire, nor the breeze through the forest leaves. The former was non-existent; no matter how hard she had tried, the kindling had refused to ignite. And the air was still. Too still now that she thought about it.

Watery moonlight illuminated the nearest trees, casting them in a silvery glow, but beyond that was a blackness so deep she felt that it would swallow her up if she dared venture within.

And now…the whispering.

It had started with a single voice, so soft as to be easily dismissed as the rustle of a foraging animal or a figment of her imagination. Though she had never possessed much of that.

But the increasingly-frequent sound was undeniably a voice. Female, and filled with spite. And then there was not just one voice, but a chorus of voices, all whispering together.

Whispering one word.

“Amelia…”

Her own name.

Soon the word became a mantra of over-lapping, echoing voices.

“Amelia- melia. Ameli-lia. Am-elia…”

“Amelia- melia. Ameli-lia. Am-elia…”

“Amelia- melia. Ameli-lia. Am-elia…”


She thrust her hands over her ears, but the eerie noise filled her head. It was as if it was coming from inside her now, from her very mind. Her panicked gaze darted between the trees, plundering the depths of the lurking shadows.

And that was when a sudden gust – no, a wall – of wind struck her, and she toppled off the log to which her behind had been glued and onto her hands and knees, hard. A stone embedded itself in her palm, slicing into the skin, and cool dirt filled her fingernails.

She found herself caught in the eye of a storm. The wind now howled through the trees, circling her small camp, fierce, daring her to defy its power. On and on went the Mexican wave of the branches, until she was dizzy and nauseated and panting her fear in harsh gasps.

And that’s when they came.

But she didn’t believe in ghosts.
 
Bert and Harry had met at the ‘Hunter’s Moon’ village pub every Wednesday night at 7 pm for the last 15 years. Both now suffered from ‘old man’s bladder’, and restricted themselves to two pints each. Harry, being the more progressive, would choose balti or lasagne for his meal, whereas Bert would invariably have fish and chips or pie and mash. They always sought out their favourite corner of the lounge to sit.

“Nice pint,” Harry remarked after he’d taken his first sip. “Did you get your results from the doctor?”

“Aye,” his friend replied. “Blood pressure high, cholesterol high, blood-sugar high. The tablets will make me rattle.”

“It’s a bit of a bugga, but good to be alive.”

“Did you see this month’s flash fiction challenge yet?” Bert took the conversation in a totally different direction.

“Yes,” came the response. “It’s weird though. Someone’s submitted a picture, and you have to write a piece inspired by that.”

“Is it a photograph?”

“A painting. It’s got three ethereal creatures flying through a forest, and three wolves running beside them.”

“Bluddy ‘ell, that’s a strange one. Are they fairies?”

“Too scary for fairies. There’s an Irish connection, so they’re probably banshees.”

“If it’s Ireland, they could be leprechauns.”

“Nah… leprechauns are male and friendly. These are female and enough to scare the wotsaname out of you.”

“What are the wolves doing? Are they chasing the banshees?”

“No, just running beside them. I think banshees fly around at night, and call out the names of poor souls who are about to pass on.”

“Bluddy ‘ell… I don’t want to hear them for a while yet.”

“I don’t think I can take part this month,” Harry confessed. “Just can’t write scary stuff… humour is my thing.”

“That’s a shame,” Bert concluded, “but there’s always next month.

The two friends continued with small talk while they each finished their meal and second pint. At 9 o’clock sharp, they headed along the winding lane to their respective homes. It was a cold, blustery night and they pulled their coats tightly around themselves. There were no street lights while they walked alongside Witchy Wood, but Harry had brought his powerful flashlight, which partially illuminated their way home.

“Spooky old night,” Bert observed. “I hope we don’t bump into any of those banshee creatures.”

“Nah,” Harry scoffed, “you don’t get any of those on this side of the Irish Sea… only friendly little fairies round these parts.”

“What’s that?” Bert suddenly asked. “Shine your torch over here... there’s something in the bushes.”

His friend swept the torch in the direction indicated, and the light picked out a pair of demonic-looking eyes. Both men jumped back in fear.

“Bluddy ‘ell!” Bert shouted. “It’s one of those wolves you saw in that painting.”

“Wait… it’s just a fox,” Harry replied as the eyes disappeared, and the sound of an animal was heard scurrying through the undergrowth.

“Gawd blimey,” Bert gasped. “Almost scared the wotsaname outa me.”

“Come on… we need to get ourselves home.” Harry advised. “We’re imagining things.”

They hurried down the winding lane, when suddenly, they heard an eerie sound coming from the direction of the wood… woo-woo, woo-woo, woo-woo.

“Yikes!” Bert yelled. “It’s those banshees!”

“Just an owl,” Harry corrected. “You’re scaring yourself… and me!”

Hurrying further down the winding lane, they heard yet another rustling.

“Check it out if you want,” Bert gasped. “I’m scared to look.”

Harry shone his torch towards the sound, and this time, the light pick out two startled pale faces with wide, staring eyes.”

“Bluddy ‘ell!” exclaimed both men as they took off down the winding lane with as much alacrity as their geriatric legs could muster.

The two bodies that owned the startled eyes suddenly leaped bolt upright.

“Was that my Dad?” A female voice asked in alarm. “He said he was gonna kick your arse if he ever caught you again.”

“Yikes!” a male voice replied in equal alarm. “Let’s get out of here.”

Both figures then ran up the winding lane with as much alacrity as their teenage legs could muster.
 
The sisters drifted between the skeletal trees of the moonlit forest, their faithful hounds keeping pace below. Crisp leaves carpeted the earth, but the beasts' paws made no sound.

Agatha, the lead sister, used her gift of sight to guide the way. Belladonna was close behind, her sharp ears pricked. The youngest, Cassandra, brought up the rear, her elegant nostrils flaring.

As one, they turned.

The glow of a camp fire could be seen in the distance, its crackle evident only to the one with the most sensitive of hearing. Pungent smoke hovered in the air above.

The sisters advanced.

Three men were seated in camp chairs facing the fire which made them feel a certain sense of male pride, drinking beer from a cooler. One was telling a bawdy joke. The punchline was crude and the others guffawed at the provocative image evoked. The conversation soon became a list of complaints against their wives.

"Women!" said the joker. "They're only good for one thing."

His friends smirked and nodded their agreement. One drained his bottle and tossed the empty into the depths of the forest.

The glass missile landed feet away from where the sisters were hovering. Cassandra crinkled her nose as she listened to Belladonna's whispers in her mind. Agatha's piercing gaze remained fixed on the males.

The hounds revealed themselves first. Their eyes glowed in the darkness as they emerged from the shadows, growling softly.

"What the-" breathed the joker. The other men were frozen. Cassandra could smell their fear. Belladonna heard their pulse rates quicken. Agatha smiled to see how their faces paled.

The hounds guarded the perimeter of the camp as the sisters swept into view.

"Oh my God!" the man nearest the sisters uttered as he stared up at the women.

One by one, the females drifted forward until each was stationed above a different male. Cassandra scented the tang of urine. It assaulted her nostrils. She hissed and raised her hand sharply and the one below her lifted from his seat. His legs kicked out, uselessly, as his feet left the ground.

Agatha and Belladonna followed suit. The men dangled in the air, gasping.

Make them dance, sisters! Agatha instructed.

The puppet show had begun.
 
The Wicken is an old name for the rowan tree. In Norse mythology, Thor was saved from a fast-flowing river in the Underworld when he clung onto the branches of a rowan. The myth says that this was the tree from which the first woman was made, the first man having been made from an ash.




‘What woman in her right mind’s going to take me on?’

He said it aloud, but though he was alone in the house, maybe someone heard.

The old farmhouse house at Ings was full of ghosts, and some of them he knew. His father had died in the next room, unexpectedly, neatly lying in his stocking feet, not yet sixty. His mother died in the house too, in the kitchen; struck suddenly breathless, refusing the doctor; propped up in Sam’s arms, patting his hand. “Let be, my son!” said the softly patting hand when she couldn’t speak any more. The dimming eyes spoke love; no fear in them. And when he looked again, she’d gone, the wick blown. And then the dogs set up howling out in the yard.

They knew.

The noise outside was tremendous. Hurricane Isidor, just as forecast, had made landfall, all the way from the Gulf of Mexico, screaming round the old stone walls. But it could scream all it liked. Those walls had stood four hundred years in the shelter of the Fell.

‘What woman’s going to want to live here, like this?’ Sam said.

His mother had, of course, and his sister, but they’d been raised to it. Women wanted things easier nowadays, and he didn’t blame them. Sam wouldn’t have minded having a few things easier, himself. Someone there alongside of him, to hold and have her rub his aching back, the wind now gusting eighty, ninety miles an hour, he guessed, tearing at the ivy round the window, walloping the chimney stacks as if testing how to pull them down.

Sam wasn’t too worried about the flock out on the fell. The hefters knew the best places. They’d guide the younger animals to shelter in hollows or in the meandering lees of dry-stone walls, and the mules awaiting the tup were safely down on the in-by.

The dogs were snug enough in their kennel in the byre. The roof though- that did worry Sam, thinking of the loose and broken tiles he’d been meaning to replace when he could find the time.

Send me a woman.

He slept. He must have done, but then he woke with a shock, lurching in the bed like a ship at sea.

There she was.

Standing over the bed.

Looming over him.

She? Or It? He understood at once, paralyzed with disbelief, this was no woman of flesh and blood, come to answer his prayers.

She was the wicken tree that grew on the low rise beyond the yard. He had known her all his life. Knew the initials carved there by his father, when he was still a boy.

The scars and knots in her gleaming bark-skin.

The woman in the rowan snapped stiffly to and fro, tossing her berry-laden hair, cracking and creaking, snapping and lashing her limbs.

She had withstood so many storms. But this time, the storm won, ripping out her roots from their ancient mooring.

The wicken tree let out an agonized, shivering cry, the mouth a black hole, and threw up two skinny black branch-arms.

But she could not save herself, and Sam , still spellbound with disbelief and now the terror of finality, knew he could not move fast enough.



The wicken tree creaking, groaning, slowly toppling to crush him.


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"The werewolf's bride is late" The creature who spoke sometimes had the shape of a black horse, sometimes a bird with wings like grey shrouds. Always its eyes were yellow. As drunkards piss, granddad would say.

"She'll be here" I couldn't see the face of the woman who spoke. The voice was familiar to me, but yet not. "The dear girl's heart is set on the maid of honour being the third. That's the delay. Three are needed to conjure and the 3rd is not yet consecrated."

I knew I was in a dream for the tree bark of the woods around had the same star pattern as the blanket that covered me. Woven by my sister especially for my 16th birthday. I willed myself to stay asleep. I didn't want to wake.

The colours, so strong I could taste them;the insinuating caress of the silken breeze on my cheek; the lavender, bergomet, wild rose scents intoxicated me. Besides the wedding was about to begin.

A canopy of flowering hawthorne branches stood at one end of the clearing, white as winter snow.

Strange creatures formed into two rows, clearing an aisle between them. Beak and jowl and hoof and paw they greeted each other as comrades long parted and happy to gather again.

The eyes appeared first. One green, one blue, glowing in the bracken. Then 2 more. And another 2 slipping thru the underbrush like will o the wisps in the darkness of all hallows eve.

Three wolves emerged from the underbrush. With the dignity of kings they padded between the assembled guests to stand at the bower. Solemn and handsome they turned in unison awaiting she who would marry the cursed.

The largest of the wolves stared at the empty darkness. He sniffed the air, ears cocked forward, every muscle anxious for his love to arrive.

I wondered what kind of beauty was assembling her own bridal party in anticipation of that night's nuptials. A fairy whose untamed wildness matched her future husband's? My imagination magicked something even stranger into being. Goats feet, striking snakes for hair, a unicorn's violet eyes.

From nowhere a wheedling fiddle took up a tune. A flute joined like birdsong..
I stirred and sighed in my sleep. I felt the longing of lover to lover, the music revealing the groom's thoughts as he searched for the first glimpse of his beloved.

As the last notes died a figure veiled with pink blossoms stepped into view. Her shining ink-black hair fell curling to her naked ankles.

The blue eye lit with happiness at the sight. The green eye burned with desire.

The bride's arm raised in my direction. A crooked finger beckoned to me. " Come, sister will you join me?"

I realised with a start I wasn't in my bed. My body hovered like an angel above the wedding party. The gleaming teeth and fiery eyes of 3 wolves looked up at me with curiosity. Expectation. Perhaps hunger?

It was my sister Elaine who called to me, arms open. The dream had gone on long enough. Meaning to wake myself, I tried to move. But couldn't.

"It is time, little one, to take up the mantle of Hecate I wove for you, your last birthday. You are one of us."
"One of us" Echoed the first voice I'd heard. The one that sounded like someone I loved, yet different. The woman turned so I could see her face.

My mother.

"Your sister's wedding is a good time to know thyself and thy purpose. Come, take your place."

Elaine's long-fingered hand rested intimately on the shoulder of her groom. The full moon drenched them in silvery light.

A drip of saliva from a sharp tooth flashed like a spark thrown from a fire.

What if I refused? Would I ever see my home again? This must be a nightmare. My nails dug into my palms. The pain made me cry out. Blood drops falling to the ground from my closed fists quickened the nostrils of the wolves.

"Mother dear" I whispered, "Whoever thou art, so must I be. Tell me what I must do so that I may dance at my sister's wedding."
 
“Annoying. This is our forest. I stand tall with my sisters, and a human dares to traipse through us. Again!”
Hazel rubbed her eyes to clear the blurred vision, or had the trees really moved? She knew the family legend. Her great-great-grandmother died here and was buried by the trees. Her language skills struggled, “by the trees,” surely they meant “under the trees,” or “next to the trees,” but the legend stress was firmly set on “by the trees”. Feeling dizzy she stopped, closed her eyes and leant back against a tree. The spinning sensation changed to one of falling backwards. She surrendered to it. Until her feet slipped. Her eyes flew open in a survival response, she stared straight up at the black sky. She had fallen backwards. The tree, without snapping, had bent almost to the ground. She gasped and rolled off, hunched like a frightened animal, her fingers digging into the leaf litter. The wind ruffled her hair. She gained courage and let go of the ground with one hand. Stroking the hair off her face, she touched a twig. It wasn’t the wind, it was a tree moving her hair. The twig twisted from her grip and raked across her face. Blinded by the gashes dripping blood, she pushed herself up and, foolishly, attempted to run away, and instantly tripped.
Hazel thought she heard, or rather felt, the words, “Daughters of the seed, catch the human!” She paused to listen, it was on a loop, repeating relentlessly.
Splayed across the trunk of the bent tree Hazel trembled like a dead leaf. She crawled forwards, tangling herself in the branches, they twisted and gripped her. The air rushed past her head as the tree unbent and twanged her towards the sky. Another tree snatched at her as she passed and flung her in the opposite direction. The game was on. Feeling weightless in the air, Hazel had no concept of when she fell or rose. Time lost meaning. A storm passed through her head.
At last all was still. She opened her eyes. She stood. She left her body behind in the depths of leaf mould. Hidden from the world. Buried by the trees.
Her ghost drifted with the others buried here, through the trees each night, watched only by the wild wolves.
 
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