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Fanfare Micro fiction published

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Jennifer Stone

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Well done Tabby, here's hoping for more success to come your way.
 

James Marinero

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Some constructive criticism:

- the content did not deliver on the promise in the title
- the MC is underdeveloped
- the plot was very thin
- overuse of the hyphen
- you need to work on your writing style

And the ending is...?
 
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