Fanfare Micro fiction published

[tabby3]

A very short story of mine--under the pen name Garry Gunnerson-- has been included in the current issue of The Fable Online.


http://www.thefableonline.com/microfiction/free-to-good-home1

 

[Jennifer Stone]

Well done Tabby, here's hoping for more success to come your way.

 

[tabby3]

Well done Tabby, here's hoping for more success to come your way.

Thank you, Jennifer.

 

[Jennifer Stone]

Wow! It's very short!

 

[Alistair Roberts]

Congratulations

 

[Alistair Roberts]

Brilliant

 

[tabby3]

Brilliant

Thanks!

 

[Marc Joan]

Congratulations! Hope the kid was OK......

 

[tabby3]

Congratulations! Hope the kid was OK......

Ummm . . .

 

[Carol Rose]

Well done!!

 

[tabby3]

Well done!!

Thanks!

 

[James Marinero]

Some constructive criticism:

- the content did not deliver on the promise in the title
- the MC is underdeveloped
- the plot was very thin
- overuse of the hyphen
- you need to work on your writing style

And the ending is...?

 

[Meerkat]

Oh, how sad! Very good!

 

[tabby3]

Oh, how sad! Very good!

Thank you!

 

[James Marinero]

Final positive rider - VERY imaginative and creative!

 

[tabby3]

Thanks.

 

[Emurelda]

Well that's a sad ending...almost made me cry! Almost...

 

[tabby3]

Well that's a sad ending...almost made me cry! Almost...

Me too.

 

[Frances Gow]

Nice one, Tabby!

 

[tabby3]

Nice one, Tabby!

Thanks!