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Craft Chat MARCH 2023 – Flex Your Writing Muscles

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Ancora Imparo

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Hi, Litopians! In this CraftChat we're looking at some fun writing exercises that might help us explore our creativity, break a bout of writer's block, or just give us an excuse to try something different. Please feel free to share any advice or exercises you know.

As before, the discussion thread will be open for FIVE DAYS from when we post the Chat. Let us know your thoughts. If you disagree with anything, that’s fine. Tell us why. We love hearing from you. All opinions are welcome and valid additions to our learning. Keep it civil.
Rachel (RK Capps), Galadriel, Kay (Ancora Imparo)

WRITING EXERCISES
You’ve hit a wall in your WIP, need to take a break from it, are bored, or just fancy trying your hand at something different – but short. All you need is something to break the boredom or the block, so it’s best to keep it short enough to be fun.

Some writing exercises can get you thinking in different ways. You can try different styles that can help you see the techniques other writers have been using to good effect. At Uni we had to write a chapter or short story in the style of one of our (preferably successful) favourite authors. It was fun. Because first, of course, we had to read and analyse their writing. Sometimes, it’s only once you try to consciously emulate a writer (as an exercise in creative writing, not as a way to rip them off or earn money from a style they’ve perfected), that you see the joins, or what specific words / phrases the writer uses to give the reader a hint of how smart, stupid, or charismatic a character is.

I wrote a short story and learned the importance of one piece of punctuation: the question mark. “Indeed, sir?” Versus "Indeed, sir” from clever Jeeves to not-so-clever Bertie Wooster gave me all the tone of voice I needed as a reader to make me smile and know exactly what P. G. Wodehouse was trying to convey about what was going on inside the valet’s head. I think that’s genius. A question mark.

So, here are a few exercises I’ve learned about down the years. Please add your own in the comments over the next five days – the more we have, the more chance our members have of finding one they’d like to try. One of them (the First Line one, under) fired me up enough to write a short story, which grew from one of the first lines I came up with. You never know where small steps will lead you.

1)
Write a scene where your protagonist is in emotional turmoil (anything from fury to grief, ecstasy to despair, terror to boredom, but the emotion must be strong). Describe it without telling us anything about what the character "felt" – or exactly what has happened to cause the emotion. You can allude to it, but absolutely no full-blown exposition. We don’t need it. We only want to know what this character doestheir actions.
2)
Write a scene using only dialogue to let us know something has happened. Ideally, it should be something big. But sometimes even inane dialogue can make us laugh so, or betray a character's true intentions – it's up to you. A tip: read this out loud if you can. That helps you spot when it doesn’t sound natural.
3)
Write ten first lines. These can be for stories you would like to write, or just first lines you think are good.
Now write another ten for books that have to be commercial.
4)
There are two ways of doing this one. The first is specific. If you have access to any children around the ages of 4-10, ask them to choose five different things:
1) an animal
2) a ghost, a demon, Angel OR Vampire (or all four if you really want a challenge)
3) A meadow, a mountain, a river OR an underground world
4) What is the worst thing that could possibly happen in any world?
5) One character from TV or movies that you think is really silly / stupid

The second way is much looser. Choose:
1) An animal
2) A character (human or otherwise)
3) A place
4) A catastrophe
5) An idiot

Weave a story from the elements they choose.

Of course you can choose the elements yourself – there's no rule that says you can't. But your preferences are bound to affect your decisions, and it can stretch you more if someone else decides the elements you have to weave a story from. Besides, kids can come up with outrageous, funny, off-the-wall examples so it’s worth asking any you know.
5)
A poem, prose, or letter to yourself about who is emerging from your personal story. It's about celebrating who you are.
6)
There are lots of creative writing exercises you can find by Googling that search term. One well-known one is to write a scene without including any adjectives or adverbs. Yeah yeah yeah. I challenge you to do both: write a scene without any adjectives and adverbs and then write a scene with adjectives and adverbs. The scene doesn’t have to be FULL of adjectives and adverbs, just include them.

Your own writing style will dictate which you prefer. Write the scenes anyway. And don’t just chuck in any old adjective or adverb – choose the right ones. Take your time. Think about these words just as hard as you think about not using them.

Now, bearing in mind that everything is about balance, edit both scenes. Don’t just delete or cross out all offending adjectives and adverbs. You are Counsel for the Defence and Counsel for the Prosecution. Consciously tell yourself why these words deserve the death penalty, or why they deserve to live in that sentence. Be fair. Remember karma…
Have fun.
Ancora Imparo
 
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a) Look over a piece of writing that you have already done, and choose, say ten words (make a mixture of nouns, verbs, adjectives). Then, write a five sentence poem with each line using two of your chosen words.

b) This has the effect of making you consider, more deeply, your vocabulary. It may also inspire you to write something wholly new because you’re looking at the words in a ‘new light,’ and isolated from the original writing.

c) Write a story about a house known to you in the past. Keep this more as free-writing and maybe set a timer; just let the words flow. After, rewrite it in the 3rd person. Notice how it’s changed the atmosphere or how it’s impacted on authorial/ narrator’s distance.

d) Craft a portrait of someone well-known to you.

e) Try the ever popular 50 word max story.

f) In true Oulipo fashion take a well-known poem (or your own) and for every noun switch it for one that is seven nouns on from the original word, in the dictionary. So, for example: cat is the original noun – catacomb, is the seventh noun on from this in the dictionary. Of course, you can choose whatever number and maybe you’d rather try it out with verbs or adjectives instead. Check out the Oulipo; they had a repertoire of games.

Try Oulipo Techniques and Cure Your Writer’s Block - Owlcation
 
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Six characters, each with their own personality. Write a scene that involves all six and use their actions and dialogue to show their personality. No adjectives or adverbs that state personality (e.g. nervous) are allowed. Put it aside for a week (or longer if you have a tremendous memory). Re-read it. Can you envisage each personality from what you have written? And/or read it to friends/writers' group. Get them to suggest the personality of each of your six characters.

Choose two different states of weather. Write a scene using one state to create mood. Write the same scene using the other state. This is a good exercise in how setting can really impact a story.
 
I'm stuck so this is a very timely post. Lately I've been on my knees begging my inner creative to come out from underneath the couch.
"C'mon, Sweety. You only have to write 400 words."
"Liar. The last time you said that I spent three months chained to the keyboard writing 2 books."
"Well, they were winter months. Be fair."
Stubborn silence. The rustle of an unforgiving back being turned my direction. I peer through the sofa's dust fringe.
"Look, that nice Ancaro says you can write a story about a vampire, and a ghost otter who drown Jar Jar Binks in a river of chocolate sauce."
Eyes appear in the darkness under the divan. Though they are only the ones in the back of the head I feel hopeful.
"Can he die horribly, horribilus?", Creative squeaks.
"Sweetums, you can put a giant maraschino cherry in his mouth and dunk him as many times as you like."
A winged creature like a Terry Pratchett unglamoured fairy emerges dusting itself off. A wicked grin spreads across it's face as it lopes, black wings akimbo, towards the keyboard.
 
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