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Dan Henshaw

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Hello everyone. I've written a children's novel and am currently in the editing stage.
We all know that the first page/chapter is vital to grabbing publishers/agents' attention.
So I wondered if anyone would be interested in reading my first chapter and giving me some feedback...?

It's a story for 8-12 year-olds and the first chapter is only about 600 words.

Cheers

Dan
 

Emurelda

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Hi Dan,

I'm at the same stage as you..can we swap reading of each others first chapters :D
Same target audience as yours.
Mine's about 1800 words..is that ok?
 

Emurelda

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You can start a pm conversation...I just discovered that tool here! It's great. Will post a message now.
 

Robinne Weiss

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I'd be keen to swap first chapters. Mine is a YA fantasy, about 1700 words. And Emurelda, would be happy to swap chapters with you, too, if you want!
 

Island Writer

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I'm happy to take a read if you need extra feedback as I also write for MG - gosh it's lovely to see some many who do! Send me a PM.
 
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