Feedback Request

[Dan Henshaw]

Hello everyone. I've written a children's novel and am currently in the editing stage.
We all know that the first page/chapter is vital to grabbing publishers/agents' attention.
So I wondered if anyone would be interested in reading my first chapter and giving me some feedback...?

It's a story for 8-12 year-olds and the first chapter is only about 600 words.

Cheers

Dan

 

[Emurelda]

Hi Dan,

I'm at the same stage as you..can we swap reading of each others first chapters
Same target audience as yours.
Mine's about 1800 words..is that ok?

 

[Dan Henshaw]

Sure. What's the best way? Email?
This is me: mrdhenshaw@gmail.com

 

[Emurelda]

You can start a pm conversation...I just discovered that tool here! It's great. Will post a message now.

 

[Robinne Weiss]

I'd be keen to swap first chapters. Mine is a YA fantasy, about 1700 words. And Emurelda, would be happy to swap chapters with you, too, if you want!

 

[Karen Gray]

Happy to take a read for you

 

[Dan Henshaw]

Cheers!

 

[Karen Gray]

Read and replied x

 

[Kitty]

We definitely need these houses to open!

 

[Meerkat]

I'd love to take a read, if you still need readers!

 

[Island Writer]

I'm happy to take a read if you need extra feedback as I also write for MG - gosh it's lovely to see some many who do! Send me a PM.