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Probably one of the most important, and hardest lessons to learn, I'm still catching myself on that! ;)
 
I show these actions, but then I double-up unnecessarily by naming them as well, like,

He pumped his fist in the air in triumph, grinning and winded with relief.
-would work just as well-
He pumped a fist in the air, grinning and winded.

That will have to be a single dedicated edit, right there.
 
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