Fanfare! Character art.

[Jake E]

A friend of mine is just starting out as an artist and has drawn some of the characters from my book.
What do you think?

 

[betsie]

A friend of mine is just starting out as an artist and has drawn some of the characters from my book.
What do you think?

Not bad.... not bad at all!

 

[Jake E]

He's done me two more.

I'm really chuffed with these.

 

[Bloo]

I've been missing a lot lately, and just saw these. I like Derrick, Bernard and...is that Dirk flipping the coin ?

However, I don't like Kelthi. Even with the midriff, she looks more like a guy. Maybe round out her nose and face a skosh. Narrowing her shoulders somewhat could also help.

I feel the composition is also a bit off. I know the battleaxe is on her back. However, the collar of her vest (or is it a scabbard?) is in line with the axe handle. It creates the illusion that her axe is strapped to her chest. Consider moving the collar/scabbard to the other side so it's perpendicular to the axe handle, instead.

 

[Hannah F]

I've been missing a lot lately, and just saw these. I like Derrick, Bernard and...is that Dirk flipping the coin ?

However, I don't like Kelthi. Even with the midriff, she looks more like a guy. Maybe round out her nose and face a skosh. Narrowing her shoulders somewhat could also help.

I feel the composition is also a bit off. I know the battleaxe is on her back. However, the collar of her vest (or is it a scabbard?) is in line with the axe handle. It creates the illusion that her axe is strapped to her chest. Consider moving the collar/scabbard to the other side so it's perpendicular to the axe handle, instead.

I didn't recognise that one as a girl at all.

 

[Jake E]

 

[Jake E]

I didn't recognise that one as a girl at all.

Yeah... that's deliberate

 

[Bloo]

Yeah... that's deliberate

I'm surprised at this. The artwork could introduce a spoiler about her origin.

Perhaps just as important...is this what Kelthi would want to see in a mirror?

 

[Bloo]

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Klem ! Woohoo !

 

[Jake E]

I'm surprised at this. The artwork could introduce a spoiler about her origin.

Perhaps just as important...is this what Kelthi would want to see in a mirror?

Yeah. That makes sense. spoilers are bad lol.

 

[KateESal]

It's so cool to have character art! Good for you (and your talented friend!)

 

[Jake E]

More of his stuff here.

https://www.deviantart.com/goatmanarts

Like I said, he's just starting out, so there's not much there yet.
He mostly does art for Dungeons and Dragons counters and players who want a picture of their character.