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I understood this to mean 'a story that highlights/takes the Micky/parodies story structure or clichés and plot devices.' a story that is fully aware that it is a story.How is yours a book about books
Take time to do your research. Use the forum to work on the blurb element separately. I found the best way to learn was to read/listen to other peoples. GLThanks all.
I'll have another (another) crack.
Perhaps we could persuade Pete to do his next seminar on cover letters ha ha
It’s not something I’ve ever heard of so can’t help, sorry!I understood this to mean 'a story that highlights/takes the Micky/parodies story structure or clichés and plot devices.' a story that is fully aware that it is a story.
That's how i read it in the context of the bio... I could be very wrong lol
Just going back through the posts and I missed this the first time.Dm me Jake and I’ll send you mine.
Don't waste words on something that won't make you stand out or sound like an individual. Think of something you've done in your life that says, "hey, this is my personality", or something about yourself. As an example, this is mine:
This is what the bio says:It’s not something I’ve ever heard of so can’t help, sorry!
I would change the order of the first paragraph. "I am seeking representation . . . " is what 99% of letters will say.Ok.
This is what I've got so far.
I've decided to workshop this in parts if that's okay. Any help is appreciated.
I'll start with the first paragraphs.
Some of the advice given so far I have followed, other bits went against the agents specific requirements i.e. the guidelines said not to do it.
For other agents, I'll be able to put more in about the book I guess.
I am seeking representation for my novel The Trouble with Prophecies a fantasy of 85,000 words. I saw on your website that you are looking for meta-stories with strong characters. I believe mine fits that description.
It is the story of Derrick, the last wizard, and his quest to avoid any and all responsibility for saving the world despite that being his destiny. I have written it in a way that pokes fun at fantasy tropes and the hero’s journey. Beta readers have said it feels like Monty Python meets Terry Pratchett…and no, that wasn’t my mother.
She said she didn’t like it.
how is that?
Ok.
This is what I've got so far.
I've decided to workshop this in parts if that's okay. Any help is appreciated.
I'll start with the first paragraphs.
Some of the advice given so far I have followed, other bits went against the agents specific requirements i.e. the guidelines said not to do it.
For other agents, I'll be able to put more in about the book I guess.
I am seeking representation for my novel The Trouble with Prophecies a fantasy of 85,000 words. I saw on your website that you are looking for meta-stories with strong characters. I believe mine fits that description.
It is the story of Derrick, the last wizard, and his quest to avoid any and all responsibility for saving the world despite that being his destiny. I have written it in a way that pokes fun at fantasy tropes and the hero’s journey. Beta readers have said it feels like Monty Python meets Terry Pratchett…and no, that wasn’t my mother.
She said she didn’t like it.
how is that?
I saw on your website that you are looking for meta-stories with strong characters. I believe my fantasy novel, The Trouble with Prophecies, 85 000 words, fits that description.
Rather than this (I believe is too much like grovelling), I'd suggest be more forthright:I believe mine fits that description.
Would that be:I understood this to mean 'a story that highlights/takes the Micky/parodies story structure or clichés and plot devices.' a story that is fully aware that it is a story.
Would that be:
Metafiction:
fiction in which the author self-consciously alludes to the artificiality or literariness of a work by parodying or departing from novelistic conventions and traditional narrative techniques. ???
I've always wondered about that.
Thanks everyone.
I've tweaked it and I think its the one I'm happy with now.
I just have to write the paragraph about myself and I think I can send it out...
Any advice is welcome.
J
Ha. That's a great idea.Is there something interesting you like to do with your daughter? Something not every parent would do? My dad convinced us as toddlers (for an April Fools) there were little people at the bottom of a hole. Or my great grandmother convinced me there were fairies living in her rose bushes. Anything you could use as a parent?
How's this?Ha. That's a great idea.
I tell her stories on the way to school about the pixies that live in the wood we walk through on the way.
Thanks George,Hi. I write and submit primarily in the US. I have followed "QUERY SHARK" (agent Janet Reid) and novelist Markus Sakey for examples and tips. Writing the query letter can be almost as difficult as writhing the MS. Basically, what I've learned is you have to SEDUCE the agent or (as Agent Pete has said) convert the agent into a reader. I have not published yet, but a recent query and synopsis won positive nods from an agent- though they did not request the manuscript based on my first 5 pages. You need to convey primarily character and stakes, with little further window dressing. Here's my example:
Dear agent:
Lovelorn psychiatrist Tom Bauer is strong-armed back to the CIA to treat Vera, a delusional Polish spy shot by Russians on US soil. Vera swears to God she’s got the goods to bury Putin; Tom must quell her madness and transfer her to the Poles. But just before the hand-off she escapes and goes rogue across Europe, bringing Polish Intel into the chase. And who’s their lead agent? Marie Novak, Tom’s old flame. But when Marie is sent to follow Vera onto a perilous flight to Russia—Tom smells a trap. The Poles shrug off the risk. CIA stands down. Now it’s Tom who goes rogue, punching above his weight, risking everything to get Marie off that flight…or die trying.
XXXXXXXX is my 76,000-word romantic thriller set against the backdrop of the Polish air disaster of April 10, 2010. I am a ----- in California.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Agents vary in their submission requirements. In the US many don't even ask for comps or synopses. The "SELL" is so important that a writer friend of mine says she will write her next blurb, and query first, THEN choose a title and then write her manuscript. Seems upside down, but it might work.
Good Luck
Maddest?What is the maddest, baddest goofiest thing you've ever done? Or maybe 3 facts about yourself only one of which is true.
How about this?
I currently work as a teaching assistant in a Special Educational Needs school. I’m a father to one hilarious six-year-old who loves to give me pointers on my writing. Honestly, she’s funnier than me so I usually steal her ideas.
Love it!How about this?
I currently work as a teaching assistant in a Special Educational Needs school. I’m a father to one hilarious six-year-old who loves to give me pointers on my writing. Honestly, she’s funnier than me so I usually steal her ideas.
I wish I'd been around you that day. xMaddest?
jumped out of a moving car.
Baddest?
stolen a road sign and used it to close the road outside my old flat to stop traffic noise.
Goofiest?
Danced on a carnival float.
Not sure if I should put any of that in though ha ha
If it were up to me, i wouldn't even have a paragraph about myself, but that's what they ask for lol.Is the blurb part of the letter going to have the humour that's in the book? That's what I'd expect to see. My interest is in the story, not the home life (unless it's relevant to the story in a material way).
I know this is the cover letter, but as part of that letter there's often something of a mini-blurb. At some point in this thread, there was a bit about the story, but it read 'straight' rather than showing the humour of Derrick's journey/story. Every piece you send out should include some indication of the humour of Derrick and his story (ie a bit of a blurb with the story humour firmly attached). Don't give a sucker an even break - show them that (story) humour at every opportunity.If it were up to me, i wouldn't even have a paragraph about myself, but that's what they ask for lol.
The blurb does have the humour. I posted it here some months ago as a separate post.