I'd be hugely grateful for some robust feedback on a short story (under 6,000 words). The only person I've shown it to damned it to eternal darkness, but I hope that it might be saved, and that its faults might be in some way redeemable. I will of course be pleased to return the favour. Thank you for your consideration.
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