James Marinero
Colony Member
Last night set me thinking when I received this feedback:
Over all not a bad story, the first third of the book deals with the background/back story of the main players, maybe a little too much detail. The story picked up after that, it moved along till this last bit, now its slowed down again. I may finish reading it, but right now I could stop, and start a new book. For me it just didn't hold my attention, could be the writing style
I felt a bit down after that - it referred to one of my earlier books.
Then tonight I got this feedback for the same book:
Mr Marinero , a lot of character development. Will we be seeing these characters again in future books? Great story plot.
You can't please all the customers all the time!
How do they affect your mood? Do you read the reviews that readers write?
	
		
			
		
		
	
				
			Over all not a bad story, the first third of the book deals with the background/back story of the main players, maybe a little too much detail. The story picked up after that, it moved along till this last bit, now its slowed down again. I may finish reading it, but right now I could stop, and start a new book. For me it just didn't hold my attention, could be the writing style
I felt a bit down after that - it referred to one of my earlier books.
Then tonight I got this feedback for the same book:
Mr Marinero , a lot of character development. Will we be seeing these characters again in future books? Great story plot.
You can't please all the customers all the time!
How do they affect your mood? Do you read the reviews that readers write?
 
	 My last two releases are doing better than anything I've had published in six and a half years. So far, I have one 3-star review on Amazon and the rest are all 5 stars. While that 3-star review "legitimizes" the rest in the eyes of rabid Amazon review watchers, the reader (who read both books in the series but only reviewed the second one), didn't like my heroine. She gave a genuine, well thought-out reason why in the review. Did it sting? You betcha. But it also helped me put the way I'd written that heroine into perspective. I knew I'd written her that way. I had a perfectly reasonable (in my mind, anyway) explanation for writing her that way. But not all readers will see it that way, and that review helped me realize the point.
 My last two releases are doing better than anything I've had published in six and a half years. So far, I have one 3-star review on Amazon and the rest are all 5 stars. While that 3-star review "legitimizes" the rest in the eyes of rabid Amazon review watchers, the reader (who read both books in the series but only reviewed the second one), didn't like my heroine. She gave a genuine, well thought-out reason why in the review. Did it sting? You betcha. But it also helped me put the way I'd written that heroine into perspective. I knew I'd written her that way. I had a perfectly reasonable (in my mind, anyway) explanation for writing her that way. But not all readers will see it that way, and that review helped me realize the point. 
 
		 
 
		 
  
 