Lost Time up for discussion

[Tim James]

I have posted the first two chapters of a book I am working on in the Groups section for some feed back.
Anyone interested, please feel free to tear it to pieces. All comments, good or bad, will be gratefully received.

 

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@Tim James
Read and commented

 

[Amber]

I did .... enjoyable read.

 

[Tim James]

Many thanks, @Amber . Very helpful your comments are too.

In fact all the comments I have had have been useful, so many thanks to all who have taken the time to read it.

 

[Amber]

Many thanks, @Amber . Very helpful your comments are too.

In fact all the comments I have had have been useful, so many thanks to all who have taken the time to read it.

You're very welcome. I'm always relieved when it turns out I haven't offended someone.

 

[Tim James]

It would take a lot to offend me.
Even bad comments are useful. In fact sometimes they are more useful than the good.

 

[Katie-Ellen]

True, Tim.

To get to know you is to love you, Amber.

 

[Kitty]

It would take a lot to offend me.
Even bad comments are useful. In fact sometimes they are more useful than the good.

This is so true. Very often the feedback which appears the harshest at first glance is in fact the most helpful. That’s one of the best thing about the critiques here on Litopia. We are told what we need to hear even though it may not be what we want to hear

 

[Carol Rose]

If you post something here and ask for feedback, that's what you're going to get. It may not be what you were hoping to hear, but it will be an honest reader's reaction. And with unpublished work, that is exactly what you want. That's what is the most helpful. And the best part is you can keep posting it, after you've worked on the issues a bit, and we'll keep reading it and continue to help you improve it. There is no place I know of where this happens simply because the members of a site WANT to help each other.

That being said, no one is obligated to change anything based on feedback. It's your story, after all. And feedback here, just like a review of published work, are only opinions. You can take them or leave them.

I've had feedback on unpublished work, and reviews on published work, that have left me scratching my head. And sometimes, the author giving feedback on unpublished work has ideas about craft issues that are wrong, I'm sorry to say. Probably because they learned it the wrong way. What constitutes passive voice seems to be a biggie for this, though I'm not sure why, since it's fairly straightforward.

In those cases, and in cases where I'm left wondering if the reviewer actually read the same book I wrote, I take what's useful and leave the rest. My litmus test for any type of feedback or review is that if I'm reading the same thing from several people, I need to sit up and pay attention.

If, however, it's an isolated issue or something so off the wall I'm unable to figure out where it came from, I move on.

I once had a reviewer say she "threw up in her mouth a little" at my choice of a certain word she hates. What a silly, juvenile thing to write in a review, especially a reviewer who is known to read the most graphic, detailed BDSM books and LOVE them to bits. LOL!

Gotta have super thick skin in this game. You have to be able to laugh at stuff like that, while also taking constructive criticism.

 

[Katie-Ellen]

Thick skin. Spot on! Sensitive enough to do the writing. Resilient enough not to resent the messenger.

 

[Tim James]

... if I'm reading the same thing from several people, I need to sit up and pay attention. ...

Absolutely right, @Carol Rose . One person's view might be wrong. Lots of people thinking exactly the same thing are usually right.
In my opinion, all feedback is good. I might not agree with some of it, but that doesn't mean it's not good.

 

[Paul Whybrow]

Feedback, even from supposed experts, can be wildly unhelpful, often missing the whole point of the story. One of my favourite examples of asinine criticism came from publisher Peter J Bentley, who said of Herman Melville's Moby Dick:

"First, we must ask, does it have to be a whale?

"While this is a rather delightful, if somewhat esoteric, plot device, we recommend an antagonist with a more popular visage among the younger readers. For instance, could not the Captain be struggling with a depravity towards young, perhaps voluptuous, maidens?"

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