When I created my main protagonists of Dogs of London, Northern Wings (etc.), Jont, CJ and Hazel, I had them in mind as early 20s.
Then, the beta reader of my first draft (an experienced published SF and thrillers writer) advised me to raise their ages to mid to late 30s, as this would be more in keeping with the thriller genre, and remove some of the youthful banter between them, for the same reason. However, I've now been encouraged to appeal to a teenage readership, by re-writing Dogs as a YA thriller. The problems I'm having with that, are that the part of the narrative set in the past makes the adults who encourage the protag to learn his craft technically guilty of child abuse/neglect. (He was originally 19 and a student in this timeline. In the edit, he has just turned 15).
So, I did a bit of research about whether it was possible to have a thriller protagonist who is legally an adult, though a young one, and hit upon the emerging genre of New Adult, in which protagonists are aged 18-30. It's given me a promising way out of my dilemma. By simply changing their ages back to early 20s, while keeping the edits I've done to tighten up chapters 2-8, I can have the story as I want it. It also means that, if this becomes a long series, I have plenty of scope for slowly aging the characters each story, and can include all the character development that people go through in their 20s.
Thoughts?
Then, the beta reader of my first draft (an experienced published SF and thrillers writer) advised me to raise their ages to mid to late 30s, as this would be more in keeping with the thriller genre, and remove some of the youthful banter between them, for the same reason. However, I've now been encouraged to appeal to a teenage readership, by re-writing Dogs as a YA thriller. The problems I'm having with that, are that the part of the narrative set in the past makes the adults who encourage the protag to learn his craft technically guilty of child abuse/neglect. (He was originally 19 and a student in this timeline. In the edit, he has just turned 15).
So, I did a bit of research about whether it was possible to have a thriller protagonist who is legally an adult, though a young one, and hit upon the emerging genre of New Adult, in which protagonists are aged 18-30. It's given me a promising way out of my dilemma. By simply changing their ages back to early 20s, while keeping the edits I've done to tighten up chapters 2-8, I can have the story as I want it. It also means that, if this becomes a long series, I have plenty of scope for slowly aging the characters each story, and can include all the character development that people go through in their 20s.
Thoughts?