Peyton Stafford
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I read it through. The book sold and sells. It did not touch me. I want to know how it and the author became commercially successful. The first lines, brilliant. The rest, the world building, etc., boring, a folk tale spun into a novel. But that may be what her fans like.I want to discuss what we discuss in the Huddle.
1. Do you see in the first 700 words (because that is what Pete continually stresses):
a) Emotion?
b) Action?
c) Do I care about this MC?
d) Is there an inciting event within the first 700 words that "hooked" you?
e) What's the voice?
I want to discuss what we discuss in the Huddle.
1. Do you see in the first 700 words (because that is what Pete continually stresses):
I read it through. The book sold and sells. It did not touch me.
Looking forward to hearing your Cupid and Psyche take. Thank you.I don't. I am a little over halfway done myself and will likely finish in the next day or two. But if any of you who are already finished have got some great questions, please do let me know--btw, this seems to be Cupid and Psyche, except Korean and Cupid not a gutless weasel afraid of his mummy.
I finished and loved this (The Song of Achilles). It's fiction, based on the myth, but who knows? Yes, you would not have read in high school how much in love they were!!!Started listening to the audiobook on the way home from work. I'm only a few chapters in, yet already know this won't be like anything I read in highschool.
I wanted something different and got it. Karma strikes again.