Paul Whybrow Full Member Joined Jun 20, 2015 Location Cornwall, UK Aug 2, 2022 #1 'All the information you need can be given in dialogue.' Elmore Leonard
D Dorm Ant Basic Joined Jul 7, 2021 Location UK Aug 2, 2022 #2 Unless it's an information dump shoehorned into dialogue, which comes across as awkward exposition, with a forced and unnatural feel.
Unless it's an information dump shoehorned into dialogue, which comes across as awkward exposition, with a forced and unnatural feel.
