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David Steele
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Mad results last night. Still amazed how helpful people are

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Hahahaha... Mother...Mad results last night. Still amazed how helpful people are
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I thought Mother offered the best non-spoiler examples. Tough to know what to talk about, because everything that happens is - by definition - unexpected.Hahahaha... Mother...
No, these were all great hooks.I thought Mother offered the best non-spoiler examples. Tough to know what to talk about, because everything that happens is - by definition - unexpected.
Maybe that's a US thing? Like a logline, teaser, or cold open with television. Something to capture the reader's interest quickly.I keep hearing the expression 'hook'. Still a bit lost by it.
Pants. Were you pitching as well? If so, sorry to have missed you.I saw nothing come through my twitter,
Wait, what happened? Is everything alright?Only sent out one, via Facebook, unfortunately spent the day at the hospital, my dear partner doesn't have the best of health, but that's life![]()