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The Moon vs. Brian Cox

Of the many jobs I’ve juggled, my latest presents a unique challenge.

Sabah, in Malaysian North Borneo, is popular with Korean tourists. Five hours south of Seoul, it offers rich seafood, fun watersports, spectacular sunsets, golf courses, and tuition centres.

Yes, tuition centres.

While parents enjoy their lobster lunches after the morning golf round, their offspring are safely tucked away in a classroom with me. Five kids, wildly varying ages and abilities, in one small room for six hours. And just to spice things up, my boss occasionally tosses in a Chinese student who speaks neither English nor Korean. I try to make the lessons fun because these serious and thoughtful students are, after all, on holiday. Most days I manage and we have a blast. Some days I don’t and we have to do grammar worksheets.

The other day, some of the parents requested that I teach “science.” Just “science” — no further specification. Fine, I thought, let’s do some gravity. Egg drops, parachuting figures, catapults…perfect for a class of four studious yet energetic boys and one cheerful, geeky girl.

I usually start lessons with short videos to introduce what we are doing. That day, I wanted to begin with Galileo’s Leaning Tower of Pisa experiment, the one where you drop two objects of different weights and they land simultaneously. It can be done with a stapler and an eraser, for instance, but I wanted something with more impact. Plus, the experiment works best in a vacuum, without pesky air resistance.

After sifting through YouTube, I narrowed it down to two options: Apollo 15’s David Scott dropping a feather and hammer on the moon, or Brian Cox dropping a feather and a bowling ball in the vacuum of NASA’s Space Power Facility.

In my rush, I let my personal bias take charge. Astronauts on the moon? How could anything be cooler than that?

Quite a lot, actually.

The Apollo footage is grainy and difficult to see, and it has that crackly “moon” audio. David Scott spends some time explaining his upcoming demonstration, including a detailed footnote about the falcon feather (noteworthy because their lunar module was named Falcon).

When he finally drops the objects, the moment falls flat. Not a single kid paid attention. Everyone was poking their water bottles, fiddling with paper and looking at the ceiling.

Humbled, I tried Brian Cox’s video. The difference was stunning. His version is a storytelling masterpiece that had everyone glued to the screen from start to finish. You can go and check it out for yourself. The setting, the atmosphere, the goal, the suspense, the climax…it’s perfect.

The lesson? While the Apollo demonstration might have been conceptually cooler, Cox’s superior execution won the day. I guess it’s not so much about having the most impressive idea, it’s about how the story is told.
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Ah yes... Brian Cox. Great storyteller who may be the astronomer's answer to David Attenborough. It's always possible to finally grab children's attention... just gotta hide their tablets and phones first.
Asian schools are pretty strict, so devices are rarely a problem. My son sneaked his into school once. The teacher confiscated it....for three months.
 
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We homeschooled in the US, but at 9 my youngest went into a Swiss primary school. At the first teacher -parent conference I met the fed rep with all the pedagoguery alphabet after her name tasked with making sure immigrant kids learn german grammar. Her complaint was that Sam wasn't doing homework. And then I learned she meant the same grammar worksheet he'd already correctly done twice but refused to do over the 3rd time. "How did yu teach such a boy?", she demanded. The most polite answer I could manage was that I learned to teach.
Your blog demonstrates so well that a good teacher is an artist. As is a writer who can enthrall a reader. You are both.
Since I learned they can live to be 100 in the US and the old ones babysit the young ones I can't eat Maine lobster anymore, but the word calls up powerful memories. We did have it grilled in Pakistan and in gorgeous curries.
 
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We homeschooled in the US, but at 9 my youngest went into a Swiss primary school. At the first teacher -parent conference I met the fed rep with all the pedagoguery alphabet after her name tasked with making sure immigrant kids learn german grammar. Her complaint was that Sam wasn't doing homework. And then I learned she meant the same grammar worksheet he'd already correctly done twice but refused to do over the 3rd time. "How did yu teach such a boy?", she demanded. The most polite answer I could manage was that I learned to teach.
Your blog demonstrates so well that a good teacher is an artist. As is a writer who can enthrall a reader. You are both.
Since I learned they can live to be 100 in the US and the old ones babysit the young ones I can't eat Maine lobster anymore, but the word calls up powerful memories. We did have it grilled in Pakistan and in gorgeous curries.
Grammar worksheets just teach kids to...fill in worksheets. They might as well play sudoku.
 
Love the lesson here. Sometimes I'm overwhelmed by the clever concepts of books I find browsing. Now, I've learned to check the reviews. Quite often, the execution on that captivating high-concept in a beautiful new world falls flat, and the readers will let you know it.
True! Same same could be said for critiques ☺️
 

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