I've switched direction for my initial query sentence/s logline or pitch or whatever someone wants to call it. I'm wondering if y'all could say which one peaks your interest the most. Numbers at the end are word count.
1) Two women from different walks of life cross paths and spark a journey to self-acceptance and releasing demons, where love tests their courage to reshape their futures. 27
2) A chance encounter sparks a transformative journey for two women, where the pursuit of want leads to the discovery of need while navigating self-perceived shortcomings, self-acceptance, and age-gap speedbumps. 29
3) As two women navigate the complexities of life, they discover that sometimes what’s wanted overshadows what’s needed. Their options: overcome fears or walk away from the unplanned relationship that healed two broken souls. 33
4) In the wake of unexpected changes, two women find themselves on journeys of self-acceptance and overcoming guilt, where love becomes the compass guiding them towards what they truly need. 29
1) Two women from different walks of life cross paths and spark a journey to self-acceptance and releasing demons, where love tests their courage to reshape their futures. 27
2) A chance encounter sparks a transformative journey for two women, where the pursuit of want leads to the discovery of need while navigating self-perceived shortcomings, self-acceptance, and age-gap speedbumps. 29
3) As two women navigate the complexities of life, they discover that sometimes what’s wanted overshadows what’s needed. Their options: overcome fears or walk away from the unplanned relationship that healed two broken souls. 33
4) In the wake of unexpected changes, two women find themselves on journeys of self-acceptance and overcoming guilt, where love becomes the compass guiding them towards what they truly need. 29