In my completed story, the narrator identifies themself as "A child", describing past events in a 1st-person PoV. The time distance between the narrator and the events in the story is unknown until later in the story, which is linked to one of the story's reveals.
The child's speech and inner...
Make understandable misunderstandings happen, hook sentence at end of paragraph, and most importantly, personify abstract concepts.
state the story idea in one sentence, two max.
scene outline -each scene must move the story forward
Dialogue:
excites, has white spaces (no more than...
Useful tips.
1. “Instead of writing about a character, write from within the character. This means that every way the character describes the world must describe the character’s experience. You and I never walk into the same room as each other. We each see the room through the lens of our own...
New blog post by Vagabond Heart
WTF, Will! parts 33 – 35
My book was looking ragged and my Kirk and Spock bookmarks were bent. But I was determined to push on, despite having never heard of a couple of these. And also unaware that the good, the bad, and the ugly were about to hit me full...
New blog post by Jake E – discussions in this thread, please
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I recently had a great movie night with my daughter. We made a fort (three kitchen chairs with a blanket thrown over the top and far too many stuffed toys to get comfortable), we made popcorn and a bowl of Skittles, and settled...
Hi everyone,
A little while ago, in another thread, I said this:
To which, @KateESal replied with this:
And I think you're right, Kate – it does look like an interesting discussion – hence this thread. And thanks for the idea. I hope you don't mind me running with it! :)
I read mostly to be...
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