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[PMBligh]

Hey Phil, I really liked your submission yesterday. You have a strong voice. Unfortunatly I had to go due to other commitments and hence missed the end. Keep at it. You could even use the main character in other novels.

Thanks Barbara. I do have a plan to make another couple of novels with the character should the first one be picked up. Thanks for the kind words.

 

[PMBligh]

@Barbara
Indeed it was, Hickenbottom made me giggle in work, randomly blurted it out to my work colleagues and they just looked at me but they couldn't help but giggle either LOL

I struggled for Vincent's surname and to find a title for ages, so it made me ridiculously happy when people said they liked the title!

 

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@PMBligh
Keep at it and take all of Pete's advice on board.
You got him interested that's something.
A very strong submission overall

 

[PMBligh]

@PMBligh
Keep at it and take all of Pete's advice on board.
You got him interested that's something.
A very strong submission overall

That's really kind, thank you! You've made me a smile so much it might stay on my face all day.

 

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[Barbara]

make another couple of novels with the character should the first one be picked up

Maybe write them regardless? He's an interesting guy. It might be worth writing another couple anyway even if this one doesn't get picked up. Follow your strenghts and all that.

 

[MrDisco88]

Just to add to the love, really enjoyed your submission. In a few places it actually put me in mind of A Confederacy of Dunces, which as one of my all time favourite books, is about as a high a compliment as I can pay!

 

[PMBligh]

Just to add to the love, really enjoyed your submission. In a few places it actually put me in mind of A Confederacy of Dunces, which as one of my all time favourite books, is about as a high a compliment as I can pay!

Thank you very much! I'd never even heard of that book but I'll look it up now.

 

[KG Christopher]

Hello Phil'...we are all camera women and men here, recording our minds mussings on a backdrop of an unblemmished sheet of paper.

 

[PMBligh]

Hello Phil'...we are all camera women and men here, recording our minds mussings on a backdrop of an unblemmished sheet of paper.

Preach it, brother!

 

[Carly]

Hi Phil Welcome!

 

[Deleted member 604]

Just to add to the love, really enjoyed your submission.

Love this post @MrDisco88

 

[Patricia D]

Hello Phil, welcome to the Colony. I haven't listened to yesterday's pop-up yet, but will soon. I'm looking forward to learning about your novel #2