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Rob Duffy

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Good morning all,

I'm Rob, based in Wiltshire in the UK. I have 2 young children that exhaust us so much I gave up my job in order to properly complete the novel I'm working on. Evenings after bedtime just weren't me at my best... luckily I have a very supportive wife who in fact suggested this approach.

This will be my 3rd 'finishing' of the novel. The first completed novel was so one-dimensional it didn't even have a shadow. The second was way too over-complicated and had some hugely exciting and dramatic chapters that bore absolutely no relation to the story and were clearly there to make the plot work. I know this because I made the decision to have it critiqued at Faber Academy, which wasn't cheap but was incredible and I highly recommend it.

I am learning my craft and by my mistakes - of which there are many - and hope the more I work at it the better it will get. I've got until about January when the kids will need to incorporate bread and water into their meals as we run out of money and/or are spending it all on energy bills. But one day a week is fine, right?

I'm fortunate to be on Litopia on 31st July so if you're watching I'd value your honesty. Constructive criticism is so hard to find! I'm here because the wonderful Emily at Litopia (who has been amazing) pointed me this way.

Otherwise I'm a football fan, a slow runner, and a chess player. I love stories in every single form; children's, songs, books, TV, movies and try to learn something from all of them.

I'm now off to look up the word brevity as someone told me it might be useful.

Rob
 
Hi @Rob Duffy

Nice to see you and hope you enjoy what Litopia has to offer. Look forward to hearing your submission on Pop-ups late this month.

It’s extremely friendly round here so do feel free to get involved as soon as you’re ready.

Here's a good place to check out (How-to guide)to see a lot of what goes on in the colony.

If anything is unclear do please contact me and I’ll be happy to assist if I can.
 
Hi @Rob Duffy

Nice to see you and hope you enjoy what Litopia has to offer. Look forward to hearing your submission on Pop-ups late this month.

It’s extremely friendly round here so do feel free to get involved as soon as you’re ready.

Here's a good place to check out (How-to guide)to see a lot of what goes on in the colony.

If anything is unclear do please contact me and I’ll be happy to assist if I can.
Thanks so much Jonny, I look forward to getting involved, there's so much here! Marvellous :)
 
Hey Rob, glad to have you with us.
Emily is, indeed, beyond fabulous, and anyone who has the sense to spot that is a big deal in my books.
Looking forward to reading your work, and having you help with mine, sometime, maybe?
Xxx VH
 
Thanking you, dear one, O sweetest star in the galaxy. *kisses* (I'm just going to take a screenshot and print that out for the fridge as a daily remembrance for my delightful family, lol)
I totally get that. For some reason my children do not recognise my immense awesomeness, and instead think I’m a bit of a pain. I find this unfathomable. Families, eh?
 
Hey Rob, glad to have you with us.
Emily is, indeed, beyond fabulous, and anyone who has the sense to spot that is a big deal in my books.
Looking forward to reading your work, and having you help with mine, sometime, maybe?
Xxx VH
Of course, although 'help' might be overselling myself. Could I perhaps interest you in an ill-informed preference?

Like a good Litopian, I've waited to receive my email about the critiques which came today, so will be getting involved in short order.
 
Good luck with that shadow problem. I, too, have no shadow, but no matter how many times I rewrite myself, it never appears. :'(

Oh, and welcome :)
 
Hi @Rob Duffy – welcome. Looks like you're already making yourself at home. As you've seen, we're a friendly bunch. I'll aim to listen to the 31 July Popups (work commitments often make it difficult), or catch up later on YouTube. Good luck with it! Glad the wonderful Emily pointed you in the right direction :)
 
Hi @Rob Duffy – welcome. Looks like you're already making yourself at home. As you've seen, we're a friendly bunch. I'll aim to listen to the 31 July Popups (work commitments often make it difficult), or catch up later on YouTube. Good luck with it! Glad the wonderful Emily pointed you in the right direction :)
Thanks Ancora, it is such a friendly place; so much encouragement and support :)
 
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