Poetry Asterix

You finally say it,
"I don't need you."
It's a cold, wet blanket...

That chills my bones right through.
The words hurt me,
And yet I always knew...

While together made "we",
It wasn't "us".
I could not ever be...

Worth all the naïve fuss.
Violently,
I'm thrown off the short bus...

Into reality.

I get it now.
You never needed me.

 

[izi 出久]

Love that rhyme scheme, too.

 

[Bloo]

Love that rhyme scheme, too.

Thanks, Stace.

Here's a sober version...

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At last you say it,
"I don't need you."
A cold, wet blanket...

Chills my bones right through.
The words tell me,
What I always knew...

That together "we",
Didn't make "us".
I could never be...

Worth your naïve fuss.
Violently,
Pushed off the short bus...

To reality.
It's cold and wet.

You didn't need me.

 

[Bloo]

Now you say it,
"I don't need you."
A cold, wet blanket...

Chills my bones through.
Four words tell me,
The truth I knew...

Together "we",
Were never "us".
I could not be...

Worth all the fuss.
Violently,
Pushed off the bus...

To reality.
It's cold and wet.
You don't need me.