writing technique

Hi folks, Emotion! [note the emotional punctuation – I'm swooning as I write this] How do you create it in your readers? Today's BrainPick is brought to you courtesy of my four-year-old. :) A child's observation to be applied to writing technique There's a much quoted story about Ernest...

"Stage business? You mean?" He rolled his shoulders. "Don't roll your shoulders at me, you great oaf. I see those balled fists. Relax, for goodness' sake." She set her mouth into thin line. -- I'm sick of rolling shoulders, balled fists and thin-lined mouths, to be honest. Maybe I'm just...