Excellent RK! I believe in this story. I've just started. Should I wait for the new tweaks?
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RK Wallis
Hey @Pamela Jo , Pt 1 I feel is fine. It's Pt 2 and 3 I'll tweak. Not sure I can type fast enough! argh 
Pamela Jo
How frustrating for you. But remember the tortoise won the race!
It's a hole you'll be able to pull yourself out of. And brilliant to get another request. Emilia is going places - congratulations xx