NOTHING. He didn't do anything WRONG, Lex! I thought it was GOOD. He did as the story dictated- as you wrote it. George called time on Kenny, and walked away before he had finished explaining. I understood that as George getting tough. This was me, getting into the characterization. Out of your hands and into the readers head.
Excellent, @Lex Black! Well done. Nice to see (hear) George again
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