Litopia

Thank you, Rich. Voice? I just ramble on. Pete's feedback was very good and I agree with his comments. Now that he said them, I see them. Part of me is tempted to re-write. I could do it as an answer phone message as opposed to a phone call. but then again, I might just move on to the next novel, or two. I have two on the go and can't decide which one to work on.

For what it's worth, I'd go with the one you think of most often first thing after waking in the morning. Trust your feelings. [read that last sentence with an Obi-Wan Kenobi voice]

Good point. I was toying with the idea of doing both at the same time, but I think you're right. I shall go with the one I'm most obsessed with first thing ... I shall 'trust the Writing Force'.