Thank you to all who entered our Jocose January Challenge: to include stepping out in your One Perfect Sentence.
Here are the results:
First Place
Stepping out onto the front porch in the middle of the night, I was blinded by the sun, which had...
Hard work continues on this ground-breaking innovation that is oh-so-close to release :)
A few screenshots to tantalize you…
Here’s the default view that your readers will initially see… Before you’ve started to apply some very exciting themes...
Over-thinking ruins you. It ruins the situation. And it twists things around. It makes you worry. Plus it just makes everything worse than it actually is.
Karen Salmansohn
I agree.
Plus, the first draft you have to see what "sticks". A minor detail might evolve into a theme.
I like the idea of working on something else to preserve fresh eyes. The thing is, this is 100k words and more than .. I think 3 years...
Is there a term for when a writer is overly detailed, making it obvious they just want to work in factoids to the writing?
I'm rereading my WIP in prep for a beta read, and am finding sections where it's painfully obvious that I tried to make...
Ugh sounds good to me.
But how about 'wordy' or 'infodump'?
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