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    #100daysofwriting Day 43, or thereabouts. I have just written my obligatory once-per-novel sex...

    #100daysofwriting Day 43, or thereabouts. I have just written my obligatory once-per-novel sex scene. Haunted by the ghost of The Bad Sex Awards, I kept my language suitably tangential, the nearest to anything directly descriptive being the word "bestride" :-)
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    Well, I checked the running order each and every week and caught up with nearly every pop up...

    Well, I checked the running order each and every week and caught up with nearly every pop up (except when I was offline) but never saw it. It WAS the subject of some discussion here re. which version of Tintoretto's name to use...
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    Eva - I submitted this to Pop ups back in May 2019, but unfortunately it hasn't surfaced yet...

    Eva - I submitted this to Pop ups back in May 2019, but unfortunately it hasn't surfaced yet (I'm surprised it hasn't been processed in "catch ups" by now...). Perhaps you're thinking of the book that recently went through catch ups and then pop ups which was about Michelangelo?
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    Francesco's Venice has definitely been one element of my research, though I know enough about...

    Francesco's Venice has definitely been one element of my research, though I know enough about the Veronese / Inquisition incident to take much of what is shown there with a pinch of salt!
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    So, my WIP is about magical thinking and is set in ...Venice, during the plague. And my...

    So, my WIP is about magical thinking and is set in ...Venice, during the plague. And my protagonist is painting a picture that features a large pile of bodies in the foreground, but fears he will summon up exactly that reality via his art. And now the bit of my rationalist brain that is still...
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    New word!

    And surely a spudger is also now prime candidate to be the murder weapon in your next thriller? :)
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    I dread to think....

    I dread to think....
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    Setting out up the mountains today and the Cumbrian weatherline is reporting "a skittering of...

    Setting out up the mountains today and the Cumbrian weatherline is reporting "a skittering of snow above 300m". I've used skittering in other contexts, but isn't that a rather lovely usage, eh? :-)
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    New word!

    I recently discovered "captious" and was overjoyed because it perfectly fitted into some dialogue I was struggling to write
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    What not to say to literary agents.

    Ah, I used to think my first novel wasn't derivative of anything, until I realised my subconscious had simply rewritten "The lives of others", combining it with "Pan's labyrinth" whilst using the narrative structure of "Wuthering Heights". :)
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    What not to say to literary agents.

    I've attempted to swerve this a bit by trying to claim harmonious synergy instead; "As they share similar themes, I think my new novel xxxx would make a great companion piece to your current client's famous novel yyy". Funnily enough, that doesn't work either...
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    ...but hey, serendipity and all that. The scene shows my protagonist at an exhibition where he's...

    ...but hey, serendipity and all that. The scene shows my protagonist at an exhibition where he's displaying his best ever painting - what more beautiful setting could there be for two people to meet and fall for each other? Suddenly the scene is w-a-y better than I'd first visualised it! :-)
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    I hit one of those BIG set-pieces this morning - y'know, the scene you're really looking forward...

    I hit one of those BIG set-pieces this morning - y'know, the scene you're really looking forward to writing. Whoosh! 1000 words in 90 minutes. So I pack my shinpads and head off to play footy and it's only when I step onto the pitch that I realise that I let my protagonist spends that 1000 words...
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    May be a while before I'm better but in the meantime I can console myself with my well-deserved...

    May be a while before I'm better but in the meantime I can console myself with my well-deserved nomination for the Queen's Award for Industry (snot-production sub-division).
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    100 days of writing, day 3/100. Besieged by migraine and man-flu, I only edited today...

    100 days of writing, day 3/100. Besieged by migraine and man-flu, I only edited today. Specifically, I waged war on the two plot threads in my WIP that are superfluous if not actually confusing. Hack! Cut! Slice! Somehow at the end of this process my total word count has gone up slightly, a...
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