Pop-Up Submissions Grand Summer Party!

[AgentPete]

Final show of the series before our late summer break; we're back on Sunday 23rd September! On this show, there's historical fiction from Douglas, a thriller from Geoff, crime/thriller from Edward, a musical thriller from Robert and adult humour from David. Plus word games galore!

 

[AliG]

That was fun; terrific submissions.

 

[David Weller]

Thanks to AgentPete, AliG, Katie-Ellen and everyone in the chat room for your comments on my untitled submission this evening. A special thanks to Rich for reading it so well. If anyone is interested, the whole of the first chapter is currently available to view on wattpad. Type A NIGHT OUT IN WHITECHAPEL - davidweller06 - Wattpad into the Google search engine and the correct link will appear. Please let me know what you think.

 

[Emily]

That was super, really enjoyed it!

 

[David Weller]

Thanks, Rainbird. It's really nice of you to say so.

 

[Edward Figg]

Thanks for the review of Trial by Fire guys. I see what you mean and I will be making some changes.

 

[Katie-Ellen]

I thought it was quite tele-visual, Edward. I could just see it on a screen, and thought it was well on its way, just less would have been more in the opening chapter. I rather liked the Latin inscription God Protects, I'm guessing that was a bit of foreshadowing going on there, and God's going to have up his game pretty soon on the protecting front. I look forward to learning more.

My spouse is from Dover...and everywhere. Army brat born 53.

 

[Edward Figg]

I did have a second first chapter so maybe I should have submitted that instead. Being new to this, what is a cowbell?

 

[Katie-Ellen]

It means more oomph needed. In this context is means the writing needs to rack up the punch a few notches, and the hook needs to be stronger. Passion with control. It's a reference to a famous Christopher Walken skit that became a wider running joke.

 

[Barbara]

Just caught up. Nice to hear the various voices.

 

[ChrisLewando]

I like the new format... lots of good intonation in the readings.