After pushing past the wanting to give up in defeat door, I've rewritten what I think is a more intriguing pitch hook taster and heart of the story meal.
Would anyone be interested in reading this new version? I know everything comes down to opinions but I'm hoping this one is appealing enough to want know more of the story.
Would anyone be interested in reading this new version? I know everything comes down to opinions but I'm hoping this one is appealing enough to want know more of the story.